Original:
Pope Francis, the “super-pope”, has flipped the
world on its head (Turrentine p.4). Much to the dismay of conservatives
and climate change deniers alike, the Pope has pleaded with the world in his
encyclical “Laudato Si’” - the original document sent by the current Pope to
all of the Catholic bishops calling for recognition of the environment -
to realize the human effect on the planet and make a concerted effort to
protect it. By connecting environmental protection with faith and
charity, the religious and conservative community has been in a state of
conflict over whether or not the Pope was apt to become involved in such a
political subject. Jeff Turrentine, a self-proclaimed climate change
activist, predicted this cultural chaos in his article “Forgive Them, Father”,
published in the environmental online news source OnEarth, even before the
release of the Pope’s encyclical and a public speech tour. The witty yet
relatable Turrentine writes a factually based convincing article covered in
credible sources and contextual links. The rhetorical goal of the article
is to persuade the audience of the great potential to inspire change in US
culture, in the public and the government, with the Pope’s efforts to become
such a catalyst for environmental science. He does so by analyzing US
culture and why there is such a deep divide between Conservatives and Liberals,
and appealing directly to the moral and ethical qualms of the audience.
Rewrite:
Pope Francis has brought chaos to longstanding war
between conservative and liberal politics.
Much to the dismay of conservative US population, the Pope has released
his encyclical “Laudato Si’” and toured across the world as a wake-up call to
all of the citizens of the earth to protect their neighbor and the earth we
share. By forcing this connection of
environmental protection and faith and charity though the voice of God, so to
say, conservatives are in turmoil over whether to stick to their political
party or their religion. Jeff
Turrentine, a self-proclaimed climate change activist, predicted this cultural
chaos in his article “Forgive Them, Father”, published in the environmental online
news source OnEarth, months before the release of the Pope’s encyclical and a
public speech tour. He explains why the Pope’s actions have the potential
to change the divide in US political parties and change an entire culture of environmental
dismissal to legitimate concern and consequent action. The rhetorical goal of the article is to persuade
the audience of the Pope’s potential to become catalyst for environmental
activism and to inspire change in US culture and the government. He does
so by analyzing the current US culture and why there is such a deep divide
between Conservatives and Liberals, and appealing directly to the moral and
ethical qualms of the audience.
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